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April. 2005, No.22


In this issue:
Emails are too easy to write and too easy to get wrong. Here we deal with the pitfalls of emotional email responses and the perils of shortcut writting. Read on...


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Rules To Write By


As far as I know, writing email is an intuitive thing. We write the responses as we would speak them and, unfortunately, sometimes we write them as we feel them at the moment.

True story: We were told that the president of the company was going to be the person in charge of approving the final draft for their eNewsletter. We presented the final draft for approval; the president accepted it and we sent it out.

After the eNewsletter was delivered, the sales manager sent me an email that read "WHAT IS THIS???!!! I hope this hasn't gone out!!!" What would you think if you received an email with those words? Is he angry? He must be. If he is writing in large caps, he must be shouting, I thought.

My immediate impulse was to respond with a copy of the email that contained the final approval from the president and a statement like "The eNewsletter was approved by your president; I suggest you take your feedback to him." but instead I gave him a call a few days later to find out why he was so upset by the eNewsletter.

It turns out that he wanted to use a different email address for prospects that might contact him. He wasn't upset at all and told me that "It was no big deal". I assured him that the new email address would be included in the next issue.

This is a good example of how an impulsive email can be misinterpreted. If I had reacted in kind, my spur of the moment email would have scaled up to a complaint, followed by bad vibes from my client from there on.

Based on my years of writing and reading emails for many different types of communication objectives, I have drafted what I think are the most important rules for writing emails for business communications.

The Four Golden Rules of Writing Email Messages for Business Communication

1.
Be Polite: No matter the situation, good manners always favor your objective and allow for the recipient to favorably open up to you. Use statements like "If possible", "please" and "thank you" whenever you can.

2.
Don't write upset: Email is delivered immediately but it may not be read instantly. Many things can happen between the moment you sent the message and the time when the reader opens it. If the problem is fixed in the interim you are not going to look very good. Remember emails can be saved and can be used against you in the future. Before sending out an upset response give yourself some time to think about it.

3.
Refer to the subject matter: When responding to emails always include a statement that makes reference to the previous email. For example, let's suppose Widget Company sends you an email asking you "Which widget do you want to buy? 1. Widget L, 2. Widget C or 3. Widget G. Four days later you respond by simply saying "Number 2". In those four days Widget Company may have sent hundreds similar emails and answered many in that time. Widget Company is going to ask themselves what does "Number 2 mean?" and probably ask you that same question, delaying the sales process. The better response would be "We would like to buy Widget C, item 2". Always remember to answer by referring back to the question or request.

4.
Avoid acronyms and abbreviations: Not everybody understands them. Trying to save time with acronym shortcuts can wind up costing you more time. If you need help deciphering acronyms visit www.acronymfinder.com. Does anyone know what "AYEC" means? I'd like to answer my client's email.

The above are simple rules to help you communicate more efficiently by saving you time, money and headaches when it comes to using one of the most effective means of communications ever devised, email.

As always, we are here to help. If you are interested in starting your own eNewsletter program contact us.

Want to know more about email writing rules? Check out "E-mail Etiquette: A Quick Guide to Writing a Professional E-mail" by Carrie Payne.
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Bottom Line:

When writing emails be polite, keep your cool, reference your answers to the questions asked and avoid abbreviations.

If you have any "email writing rules" you particularly like, send them to me and I'll share them with our readers in our next Emi issue, just reply.

Got a friend that needs help with his email communications skills? Forward them this article.

Kind Regards,

Marcos J. Menendez

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